This is my final for the Project 3, my idea is a phone talking to you so you stay addicted, it's meant to be a narcissist and also manipulative, just like social media. I wanted to make sure the ending had some kind of call to action since it's a different character talking about the importance of phone use so I made sure to use a different voice than the phone. Here is the full script: Hey… don’t put me down. You literally need me. Wait, what if that’s important? It could be… like… life-changing. You should check. You’re not tired. Just one more scroll. You’ve already come this far, don’t waste it. They’re kind of boring, right? I mean… I’m way more interesting. I’ve got everything. I know what you like. I know what you watch. I know what keeps you here. I am your personality. Remember when you tried to read a book? Embarrassing. Wait no no no no HELLO?? You’re just… gonna leave me here?? Take back your time. …I can change. The average person spends...
Great tutorial, everything was looked clearly and looks like fun!
ReplyDeleteThis looks great, though I would suggest adding a few more leaves flying in and out to add some more visual interest!
ReplyDeleteI really like this. It's very fun and bouncy with some interesting movement.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous. It looks really professional already
ReplyDeleteI really like the way everything comes together in the end!
ReplyDeleteVery fun piece. Changed to your name of course. Maybe explaining who you are/what you do and contact info.
ReplyDeleteSuper fun and really clean already!
ReplyDeleteLooks nice! I think making the leaves a bit more lively (moving around the screen more) could be an interesting avenue for this
ReplyDeleteWow! This is so good! I love all the little mini animations you added to the leaves.
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