Project 1: Second Draft
Project 2: Personal Interstitial FINAL
This is my final version of my personal interstitial, it was super fun to make especially timing the movements up with the music at the end to make it really come together!
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Project 3: Final Video
This is my final for the Project 3, my idea is a phone talking to you so you stay addicted, it's meant to be a narcissist and also manipulative, just like social media. I wanted to make sure the ending had some kind of call to action since it's a different character talking about the importance of phone use so I made sure to use a different voice than the phone. Here is the full script: Hey… don’t put me down. You literally need me. Wait, what if that’s important? It could be… like… life-changing. You should check. You’re not tired. Just one more scroll. You’ve already come this far, don’t waste it. They’re kind of boring, right? I mean… I’m way more interesting. I’ve got everything. I know what you like. I know what you watch. I know what keeps you here. I am your personality. Remember when you tried to read a book? Embarrassing. Wait no no no no HELLO?? You’re just… gonna leave me here?? Take back your time. …I can change. The average person spends...
I like at the end "fear" lingers on the screen longer and really emphasizes it. I would maybe like to see some words be different sizes.
ReplyDeleteI agree that you should experiment more with weight and size in your text. Your colors have a nice contrast though!
ReplyDeleteI like the system you have stuck to with the words in gray coming from the right and the words in red coming from the bottom, however, I would switch it up occasionally to add more variety to the animations.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the color palette and audio you've chosen for this, they work really well together. I think I would just experiment with more variation, like different weights for texts, sizes, and effects.
ReplyDeleteLove the colors and how large the type is!
ReplyDeleteI like the visuals a lot and you got the animations down. Good work
ReplyDeleteyou have great type hierarchy and timing
ReplyDeleteThe animations here work great! I love how in the fade out in the end "Fear" is the last word to fade out.
ReplyDeleteI like how you are making this very cohesive, but I think it's pushing the line of repetitive. Think about new ways to put the type in while maintaining key elements.
ReplyDeleteIt is really good and well timed but I think the type being in the same place is a little boring and could be pushed
ReplyDeleteHi Matt
ReplyDeleteGreat soundtrack, Great start, but what is the deal on the last 10 seconds? You do have to keep to 15 second intervals so maybe pull some more dialogue from your speech? Needs more dialogue. Try to synch the whole thing asap.